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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-16 08:53 PM



~

Behold the beauty
Of the skies at twilight hour
--Masterpiece Divine

~

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-16-2002 10:12 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-09-16 08:54 PM


Earth Angel - at twilight when the sunset is in all its glory...

BC

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2 posted 2002-09-16 08:57 PM


Very beautiful Linda ~ Hugs, Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-16 08:57 PM


BC---ah, 'tis true!

Thank you!
EA

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-16 09:00 PM


Nancy---well thank you kindly!

~ smiles across the miles ~
----actually we live fairly close to each
    other!
Linda

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-09-16 09:03 PM


~Yes, I believe we do...email me...*S* with location~
*Once again...much enjoyed*

jwesley
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6 posted 2002-09-16 09:28 PM


Loved this beauty my friend  -  

jwesley



Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-09-16 09:40 PM


jwesley---I humbly accept your kind words.

May all your twilights be divine!

Earth Angel

dgvarner
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8 posted 2002-09-16 09:44 PM


ah..i think i've seen this movie!!  
very nicely put into so few words...these haikus amaze me....!

hugs, g

"There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-09-16 09:53 PM


g---have you written any haikus?---you'd be great at it!

~ smiles ~
EA

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10 posted 2002-09-16 09:58 PM




amethyst twilight
ripples like a rolling stone
splashing on skies lake

(smiles) Oh Linda, this is sooooooo lovely, Yay!!!



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-09-16 10:07 PM


very nice, Linda One syllable too many on the third line which can be easily corrected by dropping the "A"...
Earth Angel
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12 posted 2002-09-16 10:14 PM


Oh, Noah, your's is soooooooooooo lovely!
Thank you for responding in kind---only better!

~ smiles across the miles ~
Linda

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2002-09-16 10:15 PM


Balladeer---
            Thank you so much for catching
            that! I've made the edit! Can't
            catch you sleeping!

~ smiles ~
Earth Angel

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14 posted 2002-09-16 10:31 PM


Lovely, just lovely Linda. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2002-09-16 10:59 PM


Chris-- Thank you for the "lovely" reply!

~ smiles ~
Linda

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16 posted 2002-09-16 11:39 PM


Yes indeed, the lord's pallet!

Cor

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2002-09-17 08:07 AM


Cor----yes, indeed it is!

~ smiles ~
Linda

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18 posted 2002-09-17 12:08 PM


I slice apple down,
wet and sticky juice behind.
Dark seeds of your eyes.


That's my beauty moment for today.

Mikey

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19 posted 2002-09-17 12:11 PM


Very nice Angel....if ya drop the "a" on the third...oh, never mind
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20 posted 2002-09-17 12:12 PM


His lovely sunsets
inspire your lovely poem
two to remember

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2002-09-17 12:43 PM


Mikey---And a "beauty" of a moment it was!
        ---with just a touch of gothic to
           prove it was written by you! tehe

~ smiling with you ~
Linda Lou

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2002-09-17 12:47 PM


Toe---Balladeer was kind enough to have already suggested the edit, and I have now done so. Please keep your eyes open when I slip up---I need all the help I can get!

I'm pleased that you liked this iddy biddy piece!

~ smiles across the miles ~
EA
    

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2002-09-17 12:49 PM


Interloper---That was an incredibly sweet and very touching 'haikuic/senryuic' reply.

May you see many, many more beautiful sunsets!

EA

NewEnglandlazurlu
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24 posted 2002-09-17 04:33 PM




Linda, such beautiful words inspire the gifting of a beautiful picture.

Hugs, Marti

Earth Angel
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25 posted 2002-09-17 04:58 PM


Marti---I'm overwhelmed by your kindness and
        generosity---and what a picture you
        selected! It's perfect! That is
exactly what I was trying to convey!

Triple thank you!

May all your twilight hours be as beautiful as you are!

Linda

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26 posted 2002-09-18 03:27 AM


Earth Angel~~~Your words only add to the beauty of the picture...Paul
VAS
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27 posted 2002-09-18 09:18 AM


superb capture of His Masterpiece Divine!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2002-09-18 10:24 AM


Paul---That was an incredibly sweet thing
      for you to say!

May your days and nights be filled with the beauty of nature.

~ smiles to you ~
EA


Earth Angel
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29 posted 2002-09-18 10:27 AM


VAS---Thank you! Kind of you to say so, but
      I think it is humanly impossible to do
      God's work any true justice---but I'll
      keep trying, because I am so moved by
      the beauty of nature.

~ smiles ~
EA

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