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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-09-16 07:21 AM

A Candles Walk

Ablaze with candles of my write
Surrounds and lights my gloom of night
Bringing bright likes stars on high
For every candle is, a sigh.

Candles flickering my call
Making patterns of enthrall
Setting wings my mind to fly
Turning me a butterfly.

And there I sail within the hues
The golden amber of the blues
Lifting me in minds of rise
Gifting me with wise surmise.

But fire eats the tallow’s flow
Dissolves its life to make the glow
And as the candles dim each send
A puff of smoke swims each end.

I lit them just to light our day
To warm our love along the way
To make a field of preen for thee
To sail infinities green sea

And if I could a better goal
I’d even light my very soul.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-09-16 07:49 AM

Ablaze with candles of my write
Surrounds and lights my gloom of night
Bringing bright likes stars on high
For every candle is, a sigh.
======================================
And there I sail within the hues
The golden amber of the blues
Lifting me in minds of rise
Gifting me with wise surmise.
=====================================

But fire eats the tallow's flow
Dissolves its life to make the glow
And as the candles dim each send
A puff of smoke swims each end.

I lit them just to light our day
To warm our love along the way
To make a field of preen for thee
To sail infinities green sea

And if I could a better goal
I'd even light my very soul.
=====================================

Well, you light up mine with your rhymes divine

and I the moth ... am ever drawn to your flame.

*winkiewinkie* *L*

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-09-16 07:54 AM

Well will you look at her go this time! The last picture JM posted was exactly what I was thinking, and isn't it scary when someone reads your mind? Sy I knew I got up at this hour for a reason, to be lead to this beauty by candlelight, (true, sitting here reading your candle walk by candlelight)

Just a glorious moment too.

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.

Sharon

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (09-16-2002 08:21 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-09-16 08:07 AM

(smiles) Yes, and may you always put your lights on and find great flickers of hope and sunshine come your way everyday through your poetic soul! (big hugggsssss) This is a lovely morning read as all of your thoughts are, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-16-2002 08:08 AM).]

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-09-16 08:22 AM

'...I lit them just to light our day
To warm our love along the way
To make a field of preen for thee
To sail infinities green sea
And if I could a better goal
I’d even light my very soul...'

Sy, this warms and glows in my heart first thing on this dark, gloomy morning. A joy to read....hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-09-16 08:30 AM

Seymour~

'every candle is, a sigh'

Lovely sir~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-09-16 08:33 AM

JM,
To my butterfly who thinks she is a moth
That dresses up in colored hews of sackcloth.
And weaves my rhyme to rainbow hues
And doesn't know that I love you.
Winkiewinkie Randy.

Sharon,
To you I say if she declines you are the very next in line. LOL

Noah,
What can I say, but thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-09-16 08:40 AM

Marti,
The joy is mine in your read and like,

Marge,
Is that a candle that I see?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-09-16 08:45 AM

I lit them just to light our day
To warm our love along the way
To make a field of preen for thee
To sail infinities green sea

And if I could a better goal
I’d even light my very soul.
---------------------------------------------
Oh Sy...such a beautiful morning read today...
How I love this piece....
And, I'm keeping it if that's okay by you.
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2002-09-16 08:52 AM

Mr. T---your soul is alread lit---and its glow reflects right off of these sky-blue pages!

P.S.---"For every candle, is a sigh"---Well, now for sure I'll never forget you! tee-hee!
--I light candles every day!

May your flame never go out!

~ smiles ~

EA

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-09-16 09:25 AM

Enchantress
You ask permition to flatter me, you are a dear. Of cource you may.

Earth Angel
Thank you sweet, what a delicious reply.

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

11 posted 2002-09-16 09:27 AM

When you're young or very old like you and me, you shouldn't play with matches.....Great work here Sigh!!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-09-16 09:30 AM

Toe,
You are so right, it's like lighting wet tinder. LOL Thank you for the read my friend.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

13 posted 2002-09-16 09:51 AM

Superb, kind sir! You give us such a lovely thing.

My absolutely favorite lines:

Setting wings my mind to fly

But fire eats the tallow’s flow
Dissolves its life to make the glow

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

14 posted 2002-09-16 10:05 AM

From largest candle, maybe, star...
it's easy why you see so far...
for the light you hold within
and the way your poems spin...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2002-09-16 10:18 AM

VAS,

Sunshine,

Too.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

16 posted 2002-09-16 10:29 AM

Oh, Seymour, this is so lovely, now I everytime I light a candle, I will think of you. Thankyou for this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Martie

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California

17 posted 2002-09-16 10:45 AM

Sy

You light up a dark room....no need for candles.

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2002-09-16 11:22 AM

Chris,
Then at christmas I'll be all over the place. LOL Thank you.

Martie,

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

19 posted 2002-09-16 09:04 PM

Seymour darling heart yet again I’m late, I fly in here like the faithful bee I am to sip from your wordy wisdom, and it is delightful

The light that shines from within you
Anoints my soul with poet’s dew
The softness of your wordy grace
Leaves the lightest hint, just a trace
Of the you that’s spun in this
The line that gives a poetic kiss
Thoughts written of now and when
Inscribed by your poet’s pen
Now paint the sky with rainbow hue
And let me see what else you do
Light the sky and lighten the night
With your words of sweet delight
Like the wave the seeks the shore
My eyes look for your light Seymour

This is utterly wonderful and although I’m in here for the briefest of times at the moment I always try to seek you out darling heart. YOU are always worth the effort. Emma and Krissy both have me save your poems for them so they can read them offline. See you soon

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

fishop
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since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

20 posted 2002-09-16 09:49 PM

Beautiful flow, I especially like the lines "But fire eats the tallow’s flow
Dissolves its life to make the glow" To live is to use up our life.

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

21 posted 2002-09-16 10:28 PM

Seymour...I am in awe by your words.
A beautiful poem...Paul

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

22 posted 2002-09-16 11:36 PM

But fire eats the tallow’s flow
Dissolves its life to make the glow
And as the candles dim each send
A puff of smoke swims each end.

Good stuff here, Sey.

You still got the fire!

Cor

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

23 posted 2002-09-16 11:48 PM

always a pleasure to read and enjoy.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

24 posted 2002-09-17 07:41 AM

Marsha,
You are a dear and it's one of those mornings for me too. Thank you and see you soon.

Fishop,
Thank you and you got that right.

Paul,
Always enjoy your read and comment.

Cor,
LOL still got some fire. I guess so. Thank you dear.

Tim,
Always a pleasure to have you read and reply.

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