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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-09-15 11:25 PM


Focusing On Commotions

If you stop and think somethings wrong here.
There's a reason why he doesn't call.
And if you think that it's all my fault
your headed for a fall.
But if you can see that it is both of
our faults then that's a good beginning.
And if you can reflect on what
you can do to make things better
now your thoughts are winning.
Now you are thinking reasonably
with your mind and not only with emotions.
Now you can see the problem more clearly
instead of focusing on the commotion.

JamesLee
Sept14
2002

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1 posted 2002-09-15 11:33 PM




(sigh) Yes, it is always good to think logically sometimes but then when there are times where you truly know what is going on those are special times to think with heart! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, you always make me smile with your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-09-15 11:42 PM


James - emotions will do in a good relationship if one doesn't keep out all that commotion...

BC

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3 posted 2002-09-15 11:48 PM


Very clear and concise.
Excellent

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