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Furie
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since 2002-06-17
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Myriad of Unkown Places

0 posted 2002-09-15 10:28 PM



If you would truly know me,
You would know more than my joys,
More than my magic moments,
More than what the eye could see.

You would know, as well, my fears,
My insecurities, my crises,
My uninformed philosophies,
And the pain behind my tears,

Know the thoughts behind my eyes,
Know my mood from your sense of me,
Know the melancholy autumn and soft winter,
Know my presence never dies.

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-15 10:42 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2002-09-15 11:02 PM


To be truly Known by someone is a special gift.  Your poem touches the heart.  I wish you the best.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-09-15 11:54 PM


Like this...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2002-09-16 12:06 PM


To know someone takes time and committment. I enjoyed the thoughts here, and I agree, to know someone is to know the ups and the downs, the smiles and the frowns.
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