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ShadowRider
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0 posted 2002-09-15 09:07 PM





Every Flame

Every flame is your look that beautifies
Beatific, I rest my words on your lips
I know you read my mind and quantify
of how much I want you in loving grips

Pushing aside other rainbows overhead
One pot of gold is all any man should get
the infinite passageways on which I'm led
they follow your voice where bliss begets

Saving each pictured memory to share
they are not felt, unless they are ours
teach the quest for empathy and care
Immortal we are, seduced by the stars

Wherever the love goes, the heart shall follow
My hand is yours, my life belongs to you
A death in heaven when moons are swallowed
A love of destiny lives where hearts are true.


[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (09-15-2002 10:01 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-09-15 09:13 PM


"Wherever the love goes, the heart shall follow
My hand is yours, my life belongs to you
A death in heaven when moons are swallowed
A love of destiny lives where heart is true."




(big hugggssssss) Oh Jeff, this is so beautiful and made me cry because I truly believe in destiny for me and my Joanna and just the thought of holding her hand like the way your words spoke brings tears to me because it feels so heavenly to me! (smiles) This is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may destiny always bring you and Dulcinea great happiness of love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-15 10:14 PM


"Wherever the love goes, the heart shall follow
My hand is yours, my life belongs to you
A death in heaven when moons are swallowed
A love of destiny lives where hearts are true."
--------------------------------------------
Exquisitely beautiful Jeff!
You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself.
Very unique...very loving...very you.
~Hugs my friend~

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-09-15 10:21 PM


This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2002-09-15 10:21 PM


ShadowRider...A wonderful tribute to love.
May your happiness grow over the years...Paul

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-16 09:02 AM


Oh, you certainly have shown through your sensitive writing that, "A love of destiny lives where hearts are true."

~ smiles ~

Earth Angel

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-09-16 09:09 AM


ShadowRider
A lovely write and a delight to read.

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-09-17 09:05 AM


quote:
Wherever the love goes, the heart shall follow
My hand is yours, my life belongs to you
A death in heaven when moons are swallowed
A love of destiny lives where hearts are true.


The heart has to be willing to follow, otherwise the love of destiny fades in the darkness. It is a true saying, where the heart goes, the man follows...no matter where it leads. Beautiful darlin...~~heart sighs~~


BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2002-09-18 10:09 PM


Saving each pictured memory to share
they are not felt, unless they are ours

I like those lines....a lot!!!

So like the flame that warms the heart, it's the kindling of the two together that make it burn and flicker in the eyes of love.  

keep cozy my friend~



The Crimson Knight
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9 posted 2002-09-18 10:15 PM


Powerful and good write here,
Must say I did enjoy it?

(ShadowRider do you ride a Shadow?)

Martie
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10 posted 2002-09-18 10:50 PM


Jeff

If you follow love and are true to her...she gives back much more then ever thought possible.  A beautiful tribute to love, my friend!  

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