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T-Rex is coming

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the_loner_23
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0 posted 09-15-2002 09:02 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for the_loner_23

Your walking on an island
Exploring the land

You look at the many pods
Of dinosaurs around

The ground starts shaking
The other pods of dinosaurs
Start racing
For cover

Out of the forest
Comes a runnin'
Big ole' T-Rex
With jaws wide open

You start to run
But it feels your vibration
Next thing you know

CHOMP!!!
Now you are T-Rex meat
Now will your friend
Beat the T-Rex for cover

Before he knows it
He is safe inside a cave
With a T-Rex
Outside waiting for him to come out

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 09-15-2002 09:09 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(smiles) Hehehe, looks as though you have just watched The LOst World: Jurasic Park, methinks! I love the movies just as I love this wonderful poem of yours, sweet friend, now, RUN FOR IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 09-16-2002 09:43 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Now this is the kinda stuff of which nightmares are made! Looks like I gonna have one tonight! Thanks all to hades, Julie!! hee-hee!

~ smiles ~
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3 posted 09-16-2002 12:36 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

ROTFL. Julie, the expanded transportation system here in Denver is called T-Rex, and it will still be under construction for another year or so. It looks like giant dino footprints have stepped all over Denver.
Thanks for the grin.
brian madden
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4 posted 09-16-2002 01:42 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

I always knew glam rock was dangerous, but I didn't know it could eat people. sorry a bad joke about the band T-rex. Ok I'll shut up now, enjoyed this one.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
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Just a big lizard to dance upon my lance,
But for some valor is a hasty retreat, need a protector?
Well done
ThunderMage
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6 posted 09-16-2002 11:12 PM       View Profile for ThunderMage   Email ThunderMage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThunderMage

Cool poem.

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7 posted 03-14-2003 01:32 PM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

T-Rex is almost as scary as semi trucks...
 
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