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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-09-15 07:07 PM





© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-15 07:09 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ive
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2 posted 2002-09-15 07:12 PM


yes..beautiful...I agree
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3 posted 2002-09-15 07:13 PM


"I am lavender and lace..."
This is beautiful and I don't want to
go trying to choose my favourite lines...
I just have this thing about lavender and lace.
~Hugging you girl for this beauty~

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4 posted 2002-09-15 07:40 PM



This flowed so easily as if to be almost effortless, which generally means the writer has worked hard to get it perfect - with or without the help of a muse.

I enjoyed the read.

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5 posted 2002-09-15 07:44 PM


Yes, KJ,  you are..or your muse is...
all of those things...

We must always give credit to our muse,
for without those reflective moments of
musing....where would we be..

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6 posted 2002-09-15 07:55 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your Muse never ceases to enchant these blue pages with prism light and you always implore the beauty of the Muse with such grace! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-09-15 08:21 PM


Sunshine - I don't know what to say, the poem is touching, the presentation is exquisite, lovely my dear...

BC

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8 posted 2002-09-15 09:22 PM


Karilea - absolutely beautiful!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 2002-09-15 09:55 PM


Wow.......incredible...and your muse blesses you with such lovely thoughts......and mine......is on vacation.......
truly beautiful hon.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2002-09-15 10:26 PM


Karilea~ Simply beautiful dear friend...Paul
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11 posted 2002-09-16 09:51 AM



Simply superb writing! I love the presentation, the flow of words, the imagery.... the list goes on. This is the whole enchilada!

~ smiles ~
Linda

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