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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Everytime I think think of the song The song Is on my mind Everytime I try The things between you and me seems so right so right Everytime I cry I cry for all these things I don't get In my heart from you Everytime I see a rainbow In a sky It reminds of those days We used to be Everytime I sitdown on my chair Listen to the rain falling Let my pain go Everytime I sing these words you worte It to me Wish you are here to hold me tight Everytime I see a sun up above In the sky I could only smile upon those days IT used to be like Everytime..... [This message has been edited by vandana (09-15-2002 10:19 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Everytime in your remember will come months like Sweet September and you'll look back in memories' smile and know that This was so worthwhile |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful feelings Vandana, may that "Every Time" return and be for all time... Keep writing, you are doing very well.. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Echo of Sunshine and Magnus, plus I just have to say how much I like those times when you pull the thoughts at the end of one sentence into the next. Nice technique. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) And every time I read your beautiful heartfelt words it makes me cry too knowing a special friend that I am blessed to have, you! (kiss on cheek) These are beautiful romantic sentiments, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
I havent been on this forum in ages... Today i cant think, sleep, eat im just in so much pain. I read this and I felt like you were reading my mind.... Excellent. In all honesty, im speechless. But it does make me smile knowing im not the only one who feels this way. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So poignant and I loved Sunshine's response Vandana, as it will be so worthwhile. Wonderfully done (and so nice to talk to you as well). |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana An honest write, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."listen to the rain falling let my pain go..." You are so right! Our listening to the rain, can be a means of letting pain go. Earth Angel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I sitdown on my chair Listen to the rain falling Let my pain go... I am listening to the rain fall this afternoon... I can feel the pain of the past...your words made me remember to let the pain go... *s M |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice vandana, I enjoyed your poem very much |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...enjoyed YOU here my friend... and your poem too. jwesley |
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