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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-09-15 08:09 AM

I See Her

I see her through a veil of years
A mist, a cloud, a bail of tears
I see her in a childish trance
And often with a sparrows glance

Some times a trivial in pass
Sometimes within the looking glass
Sometimes the warmth of odors smell
She lives with me in every dwell.

She haunts the breeze that cools my face
She lives in every living grace.
Holds my hand when I am ill
And tenders me till I am still.

Hovers o’er my space of live
Giving all that she can give.
In touching hints that fill my day
Long gone, but in my mind she stay.

She was my first love, non other
Than my loving saintly mother

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-09-15 08:21 AM

I know she loved you very much,
for she left you with that special touch
the one that tenders us so fair
with a poet's love, so rare...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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2 posted 2002-09-15 08:51 AM

I see her in a childish trance
And often with a sparrows glance
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And I thank her for the gift of you.

Stinkylove...your feet of clay just tracked all over me mothy heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-15 09:02 AM

Beautiful loving tribute to your mother Sy.
Enjoyed this wonderful morning read.
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-09-15 09:30 AM

Sunshine,
Thank you love. and you are a rare one.

JM,
Sorry about that, but each love is different
And in that sense a first love.
And you are a first love.

WWRS

Enchantress,
And a wonderful morning it will be.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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5 posted 2002-09-15 10:09 AM

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-09-15 10:51 AM

vandana
Thank you for the read and comment.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-09-15 10:57 AM

Thank You SY....it is certainly hard to
beat the love of a mother....Many a wife
has competed for that position for eons..

Both hold special places in a man's heart.

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2002-09-15 11:01 AM

Excellent write sir. A wonderful tribute to that ones that indeed hold our first love. Your cadence is always superb and masterful in everyway. I do not believe I have ever read one of yours that misses a beat and that sir is a talent that many of us strive for. I applaud you.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-09-15 11:01 AM

Barry,
Yes but each is a first in itself. Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2002-09-15 11:03 AM

Mark,
A fine response and I thank you.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

11 posted 2002-09-15 11:31 AM

sy...this is beautiful...i have always been of a mind set that any man that did not love his mother could never truly love another woman...they give us our first breath of love...helen

Mistletoe Angel

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12 posted 2002-09-15 11:49 AM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautiful tribute to your mother and I know deep down your mom will always love you so very much and is proud you have become the wonderful Sy we all know and love so dearly! (smiles) This is gorgeous and heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

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13 posted 2002-09-15 11:53 AM

Sy

Your heart is such a tender thing.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2002-09-15 12:15 PM

Helen,
You got that right.

Thank you Noah.

Martie,
Isn't it.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

15 posted 2002-09-15 01:14 PM

Seymour - how lovely this is. I miss my Mom to-day, but sense her in the breeze - thankyou for this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2002-09-15 01:25 PM

Chris,
We miss them when they are here and miss them when they are gone. That should tell you something.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

17 posted 2002-09-15 10:55 PM

"I see her"---and we see her as well through your loving words. She was, and is, a beautiful soul--as is her son.

~ smiles and a hug ~

Earth Angel

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