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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2002-09-15 12:21 PM


Dedication of Love
By Paul Wilson


Romantic nights and loved filled days
To take this chance we do agree
Upon your love filled eyes I gaze
Love’s reflection is all I see

Come… together we will capture
This love we have found together
To be as one in loves rapture
Always… love will be our tether

Our two hearts now beating as one
Together in love’s sweet embrace
This life together just begun
Our destiny with love we face

Night turns to day as fires still burn
Love now engulfs me with it’s flame
For your love my body does yearn
Forever my love stay with me

We soar above clouds of loves bliss
To eternity’s door and back
Still my lips ache for your sweet kiss
Day turns to night… we loose times track

Our love thru time will pass the test
Never will there be another
Softly I hold you to my chest
For me there will be no other

A love between us we have found
A perfect bond for all to see
Pledged by a golden ring of round
To my heart you now hold the key

© Copyright 2002 Paul D. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-15 12:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know your love is going to swoon reading this, may you two find true happiness together forever, bless you both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-15 03:00 PM


How romantic. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-09-15 03:04 PM


Incredible dedication of your love...
Lucky lady...beautiful write.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-09-15 03:19 PM


Nicely done Paul...and BTW...wear lots of
Mosquito repellent....  Pesky little
critters...

Seriously, do like this poem....  thank you.

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5 posted 2002-09-15 03:51 PM


Gee, I guess you don't have a romantic bone in your body!----NOT !!!

Beautifully expressed

Earth Angel

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6 posted 2002-09-15 06:37 PM


Oh, my dear friend, love is always worth the risk.

Beautifully written ~~ Marti

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7 posted 2002-09-15 07:20 PM


Noah...Thank you so kind of you to read.Glad you enjoyed...Paul
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8 posted 2002-09-15 07:21 PM


loner_23...Thank you for the sweet reply...Paul
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9 posted 2002-09-15 07:23 PM


Enchantress...Your words put a smile on my face. Thank You...Paul
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10 posted 2002-09-15 07:28 PM


Magnus...I appreciate your kind reply. The mosquito repellent doesn't quite take the place of her perfume. Thanks for taking the time to read...Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-15-2002 07:28 PM).]

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11 posted 2002-09-15 07:30 PM


Earth Angel...Your kind reply fills my heart with smiles. I didn't think I could express my feelings like this but I did it. Thanks...Paul
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12 posted 2002-09-15 07:32 PM


Marti...Your words are so true. The rewards far out weigh the risk. Thank you sweet lady for all your wonderful replies and advice...Paul
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13 posted 2002-09-15 07:41 PM


Well stated and written my friend...

jwesley

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14 posted 2002-09-15 11:01 PM


jwesley...I appreciate the kind reply...Paul
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