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TradingSpaces19
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0 posted 2002-09-14 10:26 PM



No Joe you don't,
No Joe you couldn't,
Joe you shouldn't.

I thought I made myself clear,
But it was your choice.

Why do you do that Joe?
You don't have to be you,
but why did tell that one
little white lie?

I didn't think you were like that,
But I thought about it again
and realized that you were like that.

So Joe you don't have to be you
Until Monday.
*I wrote this about my brother Joe! I told him that the song "I Don't Have to be Me" by Steve Azar was about him, so I decided to write a poem about it.  

© Copyright 2002 Andrea Kruckenberg - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2002-09-14 10:26 PM


This is good.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2002-09-14 10:42 PM


LOL at this one. Poor Joe!
Or poor sis?

Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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3 posted 2002-09-15 12:21 PM


I really like this. Can't wait to read more
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-15 01:01 AM


Can I give a copy of this poem, to my brother Joe? tee-hee!

~ smiles ~

Earth Angel

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