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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-09-14 10:19 PM



Stoic steel gray, diamonds in the veins
Stand the tests of time, imminent domains
Planned foundation to beget every climb to be
Standing everlasting in a patient parody

Silent in the strength,untouchable repose
Silhouette of suns, inner peeks once rose
Tallest of the shifts, highest of the dreams
Standing larger of All Mighty midst it seems

Strongest feature viewed, safest in its sleep
Scattered out as needed, far more tall than deep
Lingered in the moonlight, longer than the long
Standing in cascades and shear each face forever strong

Copyright Kkh 9/14/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-14 10:24 PM


This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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2 posted 2002-09-14 10:36 PM


ThisDiamond - nice write with a lot of depth...

BC

Martie
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3 posted 2002-09-14 10:41 PM


ThisDiamond

Interesting, layered and enjoyed.  There are times when meaning is unclear...that the mind is at its best.  Thank you.

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