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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-09-14 05:35 PM





~This day I lay down in quiet remember~
September 14, 2002


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-09-14 05:37 PM


Marge - you write and present like no one else. Most beautiful this is....

BC

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2 posted 2002-09-14 05:44 PM


Marge, That special spirit has touched your soul and gifted you with a most delicate and beautiful write.

Peace my friend, Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-09-14 06:04 PM


Oh how beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. I love the way you do this.
Kethry
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4 posted 2002-09-14 06:54 PM


Marge,
your quiet remember speaks more powerfully of life than the thunder of creation.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2002-09-14 07:06 PM


Margie girl darling heart sister this is a real find of wonder. Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful, I love it utterly utterly utterly, your writing is always filled with such amazing images Truly beautiful writing

If the moons glow was written in rhyme
If the sea flowed at a certain time
If the stars dance knew only one song
Or if life paused before it moved on
I know they would pause and wait for you
For you know them well you surely do
You write the stars shine in softest hue
You paint dreamer’s sky its what you do
Where wisdom’s needed your touch is there
And where souls need help you show you care
Where mystery baffles you shed light
Illuming the dark and shining night
         You are the find of mind that frees me
          Brushing my soul with real clarity
You know I love your writing and this is awesome, I might be late but I do try to get here

PiPITIS coming soon to YOUR neighbourhood


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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6 posted 2002-09-14 07:10 PM



Marge, I wish I could see this one, but my ISP is misbehaving...so as soon as I CAN see what you left here for all of us, I shall come back and comment appropriately...

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7 posted 2002-09-14 08:57 PM


This is breathtakingly beautiful, Marge. Lovely, indeed.
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8 posted 2002-09-14 09:20 PM


Marge...Another wonderful gift you bring to us on gentle wings.       Thank You...Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-14-2002 09:22 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-09-14 10:11 PM


Lovely Marge...no one else could have matched the picture and the words as wonderfully.

jwesley

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10 posted 2002-09-14 10:13 PM


Breathtaking Marge. A lovely presentation. You always create such wonderful works of art.
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-09-14 10:18 PM


BillCharles~
My friend ... I thank you again~

Marti~
Sometimes ... it is such a needed visit~
Thank you kind lady~

SweetSue~
I thank you for the gentleness of your replies~

Kethry~
You touch me with your reply~
Thank you~

MarshaLove~
I insisted that you post it ... you did ... and my heart thanks you beyond what I can express~
I needed the lift dear girl ...
*hugs* *hugs* *hugs*

Karilea~
It happens .... thanks for trying~

OhDenise~
I sooooooooooo appreciate YOU~
I miss you~

Paul~
You are aware that I thank you so much for your encouragement ... it means a lot to me~

JWesley~
Thank you dear sir~
She flutters into the very spirit of me and leaves me feeling comforted~

WhiteRose~
I thank you so much for your sweet replies~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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12 posted 2002-09-14 11:59 PM


As usual beautiful!!
Betty

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13 posted 2002-09-14 11:59 PM


Marge:  So beautiful and touching!

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2002-09-15 01:03 AM


Marge, you gifted us with the honey of YOUR soul, with this lovely piece of writing!

~ smiles ~
Linda

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15 posted 2002-09-15 04:11 AM


Dear Margie
Your quiet remember made for a beautiful and inspiring read...thanks ever so much for sharing

~hugs~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sunshine
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16 posted 2002-09-15 07:12 AM



Ah Marge, this IS wonderful!  Thank you!

Mark Bohannan
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17 posted 2002-09-15 10:47 AM


Your quiet remembers are always more than just fluttered moments.  Beautifully presented but even more beautiful is the heart from which the words flow.
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18 posted 2002-09-15 10:55 AM


I am pleased my ISP is not misbehaving...

Cause this is a very beautiful poem
complemented by a superb pic...  Thanx
Marge...

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19 posted 2002-09-15 11:26 AM


marge-

this was such beautiful inspiration. your
heart flowed through this...such lovely
writing as always from you. take care.
amy

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

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