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smitty-j
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0 posted 2002-09-14 04:26 PM


There’s a part of myself I’ve longed to share
with someone much like me.
I’ve kept it close and hidden there
so no ones eyes could see.
I dared not share it with a soul
for fear of being spurned.
I dared not dream to find the one
for which my heart had yearned.
Now I see his face is there and open of myself
A place in which his words have home
and love for no one else.
I open now this part to you
and pray you take it gently.
This heart is true and needs but one
I long to feel you near me.
Take my heart and take my soul
They’re yours for now and ever.
You’ve made me feel that I am whole
And I’ll forget you never.


Julie

© Copyright 2002 Julie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-14 04:30 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you and Daniel share a lifetime of happiness and faith together in love, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-09-14 06:11 PM


This is just beautiful. It is so nice when you find someone who really cares.
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3 posted 2002-09-14 09:29 PM


How romantic. *sighs*

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4 posted 2002-09-14 10:07 PM


This is very well written. I enjoyed it and I am sure Daniel will too. Chris

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fishop
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5 posted 2002-09-16 10:23 PM


very very nice Julie, beautiful line "A place in which his words have home
and love for no one else."


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6 posted 2002-09-17 11:08 AM



What a sweet and tender poem of love. I hope this Daniel is worth it---because you certainly are!

~ smiles ~
EA

Magician
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7 posted 2002-09-17 02:46 PM


Here's a good one from the back pages.
Very soft and gentle.

Pilgrimage
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8 posted 2002-09-17 02:52 PM


This is quite lovely.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

smitty-j
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9 posted 2002-09-17 03:05 PM


Thank you to everyone who took the time to read. This really is a sweet place. Might have to stick around a bit and see how deep I can sink my feet...big smile goin here

Cheers,
J

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