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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-09-14 02:00 PM


Now I understand the rough
papered sand--and too much tough--
wine in sparkles in a glass
integrity--how long they last
in linger at the bottom dwell
and sudden burst of freedom swell--
in the comfort of a group
the bubbles rise and form a troup...
a ballet formed within a glass--
bursting bubbles--waterdance.


*for Tim*


© Copyright 2002 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-09-14 02:08 PM


Love the mental pic of this, K.  Not quite sure I 'get it' but I sure like the way it reads!
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-09-14 02:12 PM


ah..dunc, where ya been? just my goofy way of comparing "counting replies" akin to counting the rising bubbles in a glass of champagne...it may LOOK good, but I say just drink the damned champagne lest it go flat! Good to see ya friend! Thanks. OH...and the 69? A thinly veiled reference to "reciprocation" another !
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-09-14 03:04 PM


serenity,
Your play with words is not always play. LOL

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-09-14 05:37 PM



I hope Tim sees this...you may have to send it to him....he likes mail, I know!

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2002-09-14 05:39 PM


o yuh
brian madden
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ireland
6 posted 2002-09-15 06:39 AM


Karen, your images as always are stunning. Beautifully written. Loved this one.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

vandana
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7 posted 2002-09-15 10:09 AM


enjoyed
bsquirrel
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8 posted 2002-09-15 03:07 PM


Workin' on my 70th (read) glass.

Mike

Miah
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9 posted 2002-09-15 03:17 PM


I really enjoyed this, wonderfully put.


Tim
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10 posted 2002-09-15 03:30 PM


OMG!!!
doing what comes natural isn't all so bad is it?
smiling here...

Tim
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11 posted 2002-09-15 03:32 PM


bump, bump
btw... the dreaded double bump has some redeeming points also...

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2002-09-16 02:50 PM


Thanks all, and Tim? I appreciate your poetry as well as your sense of humor. I thank you most kindly. *quick smooch* (no one saw that! )
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