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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-09-14 01:44 PM



I feel like Pluto
In aphelion.
With love’s ambience ascended

Struck
and taut
I’m strained with the pain of a will
Cradled and retained
Humility refrains
Heaven

Nirvana gravity
Acknowledges the sanctity
Of this wayward, restless homage
To be lofty and hoarse
Exultation innates

A Sea of Faith.

Amidst obsidian surmises
Constellations unwaver
A faint
Concerted
Ramble.

O' to be delivered from the realm of the rational into pure song...

© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-09-14 01:53 PM


Nice ramble of very poetic words....enjoyed..
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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2 posted 2002-09-14 09:35 PM


Enjoyed the read

Cold hands means a warm heart

EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2002-09-21 02:57 AM


dude.. you know what im not even gonna comment on this u know how good it is!!
brian madden
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ireland
4 posted 2002-09-22 09:06 AM


enjoyed following this train of thought.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

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