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She is the Universe
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She is the Universe |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
She Is The Universe She is the universe, disguised as a child. Veiled behind profound mystery, illuminated by discovery. Adrift on a breeze of infinite possibilities, she navigates her destiny. Each course, each current, each hazard,but a fragment of a life long journey. She is pure ore, flowing within the forge of her mind. Transformed by the anvil of her vision. Wrought by the hammer of her will. She is a random and vibrant palette, impatiently thrust upon the canvas of her masterpiece. She is the architect of her future, the engineer of her past, and the reality of her dreams. She is the reflection of no one. She is the clarity of my existence. Tom Bishop |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tom, I am already becoming a big fan of your words, yes, and I know with you she will always be the confident architect of her dreams as you help write the blueprints of her destiny that she is so happy to share with you! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tom, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Perfection! loved this! ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful parent you are. Please keep holding on to these treasured thoughts, and save this poetry to give to your child one day. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Beautiful |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...She is the reflection of no one. ... What an individuality you have given this piece... which is not easily done by most! Well done, Sir! |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
This is beautiful Tom. I really loved the words you chose...great job. Julie |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tom, you may have sat in awe, thinking you are out of place....but... I think you just showed us you have your own parking spot...and it has your name on it.. Welcome to Passions with some awesome words of your own... Magnus/Barry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tom Tenderly written...lovely to read. A welcome to you. I know you will enjoy it here.  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
She is a random and vibrant palette, impatiently thrust upon the canvas of her masterpiece. She is the architect of her future, the engineer of her past, and the reality of her dreams. lovely words, very touching. Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
WoW Tom! And you were concerned about posting here? I don't think so. This is so beautiful. It was a pleasure to read. I truly hope you will continue to write and post here. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Ohh my my my my. Ok folks. I am very gratefull for the encoragement. My own parking spot.LOL Thank you thank you thank you. I am inspired by my daughter. And have a few more I will share. Thank you friendly people. |
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