Affection’s Reflection Tide

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Open Poetry #22

Affection’s Reflection Tide

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-13 05:22 PM

Affection’s Reflection Tide

I want
to go there
to hear the poetry
of the sea
the rhythm
of the rhyme
in time
spoken
just for me
it gently
caresses sand
in the tug
of emotion
I want
to retrace
the sheer
affection
of the ocean
love is
that deep
it touches
every side
with the ripple
of the waves
carried
by the tide

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-09-13 05:32 PM

Are there enough stars in the sky to equal
the words written in poetry of the ocean
and sea? Me thinks NOT!

And you have done well with this...Nice
write Helen...

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

2 posted 2002-09-13 06:00 PM

Beautiful write. If flows perfectly as the tide.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-09-13 06:19 PM

This is just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-09-14 04:46 PM

helen - the sea is there, let the surf gently caress...

BC

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