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The Stars, The Sea and Shamrocks

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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 09-13-2002 12:30 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond


From somewhere deep inside of me, beyond celestial gravity
A pull so strong to turn outside of every feeling that I hide
And in your hands these petals fall the essence of me one and all
Forever blooms in tender trill, the best of me as love I will

From sorrow's arms to wipe away the snow uncovered where I lay
To comfort of the cold long night I find your arms to hold me tight
And finally to still my tears and calm my breath and soothe my fears
Forever fire in kind attend, the best of me this love I send

From once a stranger found by fate, beyond a friend in captivate
A pull so strong to tear my soul and sewn your own to make me whole
And if I could reach far enough through spaces wide and waters rough
Forever blooms to shower on the man I shine my love upon

From near to far in each night star a prayer to hold you as you are
To keep you well and hold you tight, the arms around both day and night
And finally to smile again, a chance beside each now and then
Forever fire, forever sea in love so green found luckily

Copyright Kkh 9/12/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-13-2002 04:54 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 09-13-2002 12:34 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 09-13-2002 12:44 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

What very nice sentiments, and so well put. Good one.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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3 posted 09-13-2002 12:46 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Blessed is he who is worthy of such words of love.--TRULY!!

..."From once a stranger found by fate..."
--Destiny---and this is destined to be a keeper by many.

Simply put, "I loved this!"

Earth Angel

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4 posted 09-13-2002 12:55 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

This is wonderful; I enjoyed it so much and it's a keeper.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

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(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart forever be filled with four-leafed clovers of loves blessings forever and ever and may his smile be that special pot on the other end of the rainbow! This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 09-13-2002 04:05 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

My,  this is surely a keeper...I knew you
could write, write awesomely,  write love,
passion,  so many different feels...But,
I never knew you could write of love as well
as you have here...  May he never forget
these written words of one's beautiful
heart...
Kethry
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7 posted 09-13-2002 06:29 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Awesome write, perfect metre perfect form, your subject has its own charm.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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ThisDiamond
This is a diamond, well polished and set.
Excellent write.
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9 posted 03-17-2004 08:27 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

again, such lovely thoughts...gorgeous!!
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