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Many words to say….
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Many words to say…. It’s hard to say what’s in your heart for the person who is distinguished..… You wish that you could tell him how his position in you heart…. You wish that he could spend all the time with you.. It’s hard to be honest in this situation…. It’s hard to stop talking to him in one day… One day is like a month…. Its hard to get used to this person you Love You live to hear his voice…. You always miss his smile… But many words to say in your heart… It’s hard to tell these words by saying…. It’s much easier by written.. You want to tell him that you will be in his side…. You know that you can be his light…. His life,, and the one who can trust… Many words to say… Many fear to hide… Many love to keep…. Secretlife, (Easy come,, Easy go) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
easy come Easy go? Hmmmm...... I think from the tone of your words it is not so easy for these feelings or words to come and or go... it is hard to love and be loved in an open honest relationship.... hard not to lose yourself...hard not to find things that hurt.... hard not to do things that hurt... but somehow it seems people find love every day and survive the pitfalls the heartache the lonely.... I liked this... it made me stop, slow down enough to try and see again the word structure that led me to the feeling... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It doesn't sound like it's easy come easy go.I like the structure though Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is good. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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