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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-12 10:01 PM





Do roses know, when in the ground
The beauty they shall soon display,
Or petaled paths that footsteps pound
So understand their way?

Do symphonies hear their own songs
Before the sweetest music sounds?
Or ocean wave, tossed, borne along
Choose fair beaches to be bound?

Does rainfall carry destiny
Upon its journey, downward fall?
Or shining sunbeam ever think to be
More than the fullest sum of all?

Be more than path or rose or rain
Or even sweetest symphony,
Much more than waves or sunbeams deign,
Come let your love be found in me!

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-09-12 10:06 PM


Do roses know, when in the ground
The beauty they shall soon display,

This rose says yes they do. Lovely write cher. Enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-12 10:12 PM




(smiles) Yes, roses do know and when they whisper the rain will fall like a lover showering ones lips with kisses spiritually! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
3 posted 2002-09-12 10:15 PM


Thank you seet Rose! smiles....you would know that best

Noah: hey, my friend, thanks for always lifting up my day..you are so cheery    
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-09-13 04:23 AM


I'm always looking for love...James
pmc
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 48
Germany
5 posted 2002-09-13 06:53 AM


your poem has brightened my day,

Well done.

pmc

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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6 posted 2002-09-13 07:32 AM


Such a beautiful flow, and delightful phrasing Cher ... very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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