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Tonight Comes
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Tonight Comes |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Tonight Comes In silvered slippers a spirit appears a waft of breeze will blow her near she is an apparition to only you but in your reverie, what could she do? She knows your heart, your soul, your mind she is but reflection of fantasies kind she knows your pain, your hopes, it's true she embodies the fire of golden red gone blue. An apparition of common's sense she may clutch your recompense as to her you may yearn to aver and in your fancy hold her near. She will stroke your face and whisper and all you will crave is just to kiss her as her sweet siren's song is sung and in that moment, the tonight becomes a treasured instant, the import will pass as you cling to memories past in silvered slippers a spirit appears and in your fancy, you hold her near. ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 4 August 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-12-2002 07:25 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooooh Karilea....ooooh this is a keeper!! I love this!! Silver slippers and all. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssss) Oh Karilea, this is so hauntingly beautiful, I love this, I know this feeling of just wanting to feel that ghostly kiss for real, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You know that I do love poems of this feel and thought....after all, who was the phantom that walked the halls of PiP? Twas me, twas me...twas me... Excellent poem KJ, I do like this one... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Karilea... You gave me silver slippers to dance in, ...a silken tongue moon shadows... such cadence in foot-music! *Sorry, got carried away...you do inspire!*  ~Hugs YOU~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely Beautiful, Sunshine...you've weaved an exquisite piece of poetry here. I enjoyed!  *Krista Knutson* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, Is that who that was? If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I just had a beautiful day dream Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, you dance in silvered slippers of moonlight Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"...a waft of breeze will blow her near..." Your gentle words floated on a waft of breeze to bring you, dear Sunshine, even nearer to your readers and into their hearts. Simply lovely. Earth Angel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
gentle and intricate in both form and phrase. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chris, if you deem it so, it's so! Noah, haunting IS the feel I was going for...and you noticed! Ok Magnus...you can be the resident phantom... Enchantress, I heard you tapping...honest! Alwye, that you don't have enough time to come by and yet, landed on one of time! Larry? Yes! Interloper...a great comment! Kethry, I only wish I were that talented... Linda, lovely lady...lovely words! Cap'n...thank you for the intricate... thank you all! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunshine, I could almost see the shadows in the moonlight.... This was very, very good.....as is every bit of work I've read of yours. You, Karilea, are a VERY talented lady. Thank you Love, Ethel |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Superb  (((hugs))) Charisma |
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