navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » Motes of distant stars............(Haiku)
Open Poetry #22
Post A Reply Post New Topic Motes of distant stars............(Haiku) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light

0 posted 2002-09-12 01:03 PM



~

Motes of distant stars
Slide down silver threads of moon,
Weaving night magic.

~


© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-09-12 01:05 PM


Distant poem verse
written on a lunar page
These stars shine my way

I loved yours, Linda.

Mike

EarthenSoul
Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163
WA, USA
2 posted 2002-09-12 01:06 PM


Absolutely divine!  A masterpiece of celestial proportions.
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-09-12 01:12 PM


Mike----Thank you---and I loved yours too!

EA

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-09-12 01:15 PM


Earthensoul---I like your username!!---as well as that very flattering reply! Thank you so much!

Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-09-12 01:18 PM


jupiter blushes
as Andromeda wears her
necklace of white dwarves



Yay!!! I love this!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2002-09-12 01:21 PM


Dear Mistletoe Angel---you make me "blush" as well, with your kind words and poetic reply!

Earth Angel

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
7 posted 2002-09-12 01:27 PM


There you go with those wonderful small lines that send me into such a reflective space.

Wonderful Linda.  hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
8 posted 2002-09-12 01:32 PM


Marti---thank you my dear poetic friend!

Linda

WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
9 posted 2002-09-12 01:39 PM


Midnight heavens black
upon deep velvet of sky
lunar gem adorns.


Hi Linda, your gift of poem,
a weave of silver thread
across dark of sky.

A lovely picture in verse.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
10 posted 2002-09-12 01:51 PM


WhiteRose----you painted a "lovely picture" with your  'haikuic' reply! Thank you!

Earth Angel

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
11 posted 2002-09-12 05:25 PM



Earth Angels dusting
scattering stars to dream on
ours but for the reach

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
12 posted 2002-09-12 05:30 PM


Earth Angel
Another good one, enjoyed.

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
13 posted 2002-09-12 06:00 PM


On beaming silver
streams of glistening starlight
love's flame glows brightly

Beautifully done Linda...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
14 posted 2002-09-12 06:07 PM


Oh, Sunshine, that is so especially sweet!----and it has my name in it!

You just whip these up so quickly!--and they are so good!

Thank you!

Earth Angel (the same one, as was written
about in a poem written by Miss Sunshine!)
              

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
15 posted 2002-09-12 06:12 PM


Mr. T---It pleases me that you enjoy my
        haikus, tankas and senryus. Sometimes
        it is like pulling teeth to get the
        words down on paper. But this one, I
        wrote this morning in one write. I
        think that's because I was in my
        element----the heavens! hahaha

Earth Angel

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
16 posted 2002-09-12 06:15 PM


Oooooh, Magnus----and to think I got to
                  collaborate with a writer
                  of your caliber!

Thank you so very much!
Earth Angel

paladin
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.
17 posted 2002-09-12 06:37 PM


Say just enough but no more.A whisper can get more attention than a shout.

paladin

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
18 posted 2002-09-12 06:47 PM


paladin---that was a gentle reply that got
          my notice.

Earth Angel

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » Motes of distant stars............(Haiku)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary