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wondering silly! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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sometimes writing can be such a pain particularly when it is about nothing of consequence when complaining about nothing in particular when confessing to what everybody already knows it is the same motion picture in repeat shows and meaningless preludes to most sequels where an act is titled the return of the germs or something less poignant the nothing elements have captured the minds with controlled nonsense released by endless streaks in the name of … miserable unflinching like rain like acts of revenge like cats and dogs like … cats and dogs make me wonder silly a look at them and the way their tails tell tales that’s all it takes and the world is different, yet again silly! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HAHA, thanks for the morning laugh. Yes, like a morning of the American game 'Trivial Pursuit,' Sudhir style. I love to watch cats and dogs strut their stuff. |
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Sybil Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 73Midwest |
Writing is, indeed, an exercise of sound judgment even when judgment is feeling silly. But write away, for silly or not, there is always a grain of sense in what is left behind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, There is all phases of being and silly is one of them. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Sudhir, this poem is a delight. A silly delight. Wonderfully written.  |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
*giggles* Thank you for the smile.  We should all be silly a lot more often!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Sudhir! Thanks for the smiles. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You never cease to amaze me, and this again is one of those times Sudhir, great write. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir Your silly has made my smile... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all for sharing the smiles... sillily yours,  regards, sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, this sure brought smiles to my face, yep, the world is one wild and crazy place but it is wonderful to live in it! (big hugggssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank You Noah... for all the kind words you always seem to have for me... Regards, sudhir |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Suddy you rock...I dunno what it is about your poetry, it's truly unlike anything I've read - how does it feel to be unique m'friend? Shaking head here - in a good way.. (oh but I would lose the exclamation at the end of 'silly' heh)  K |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kamla, my dear friend... now your words are HUGE... I am not even sure I understand them well... unique, I sure hope to be not, for unique stands apart aloofed he becomes if not already thoughts are of everyday walking in and out of the doors high above yet amongst everyday deeds one finds odd happens that leave there scents behind to be written to be read to be re-written to be re-read and on and on and ... and yes the exclamation has to go since it is after all what happens everyday when the wagged tails tell tales however different to each one of us sitting on our own high chairs (or low?) with feet hanging down .......... THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH.... regards, sudhir |
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