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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-09-12 09:13 AM




I see within ray
that blast through glass
awaken world with morn
spirit essence
afloat in warmth
of sun that splash
into the room
with delicate filigree
of light

I watch you dance
soft steps
of surreal passage
into space

cover
but not erase
carpet
chair
and bed

rhythm of nature
do I detect

sun spirit
dance for me
morning echoes
captured on the way
to this my day
share with me
in full array
your ghostly sway.

WhiteRose

Speak to me in whispers,
I'll listen with my heart.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-09-12 09:21 AM


Good morning! It is a beautiful morning here in Ontario----and the "sun spirit" is "dancing" in full swing. I'm caught up in this  wonderful "rhythm" of "nature".

This poem fits perfectly into this sunny September's day!

Earth Angel

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-09-12 09:23 AM


Thank you Linda. Here the mood was broken as mom jumped on the riding lawn mower and the smell of gas and grass now fills the room. Glad I got that soft thought out before she did.
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3 posted 2002-09-12 09:42 AM



A nice read...thanks for sharing!

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4 posted 2002-09-12 11:22 AM


WhiteRose~

'delicate filigree
of light'


And that's just how it comes ...~
Lovely thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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EarthenSoul
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5 posted 2002-09-12 01:21 PM


The sun spirit is dancing this morning here in the Puget Sound area as well.  I'd been so preoccupied this morning that I hadn't even noticed.  Thank you for opening by eyes and warming my soul.
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6 posted 2002-09-12 11:48 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, this is wonderful, I love the shamanistic feel of this, swim in the suns afterglow, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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