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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado 
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Why did you leave? I don't understand. Why did you act the way you did? I know it wasn't anything we did. But why, why, why? What made you become the way you did? I am so confused, I can't figure it out. It makes me ache inside, and sometimes the pain just won't go away. All of my friends know their daddy's, but why do I have to be the daddyless one? Were you afraid of being a father? Or was it the booze? Now I am without a dad, and it's all your fault and I don't care whether you like it or not, because I have become a better person just because I don't know you! Copyright 2002 Andrea Michelle Kruckenberg |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Andrea, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, I am always here if you need someone to talk to as we all send angel hugs and sympathies your way! (sad sigh) Wow, another Colorado poet, I too am from Colorado, I can't wait to read more of your powerful words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (God Bless America) "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Emily Anne Fuentes New Member
since 2002-09-11
Posts 1 |
Wow Girl!! I didn't know that about you!!! And it's a great poem, really I think it isl |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
Powerful, and enjoyed The man of few words... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This is such a sad write for me to read. I worry so much that my little girl will someday feel this way about me. I enjoyed this very much. It helps me remember exactly why I love my daughter so. Thank you for that!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Andrea, this is heartbreaking for me, I can relate well, makes me think of my childhood. You are not alone. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Andrea I felt your deep sorrow and pain through your heartfelt words and I can only hope that some day you may have some kind of a relationship with your father. I was lucky to have had a wonderful relationship with my father and it was due to the sorrow I felt after his death that inspired me to write in the first place. I wish you well and hope you are able to get together one day. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
Thank you all for your kind words and I appreciate it. If anyone wants to know about "My father" or me you can email me, my email address is in my profile. Thank you Noah for your kind words. Love, Andrea Kruckenberg |
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