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We (a cinquain) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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We stumble-stands weighing, hoping, praying to touch sky against longing. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-11-2002 02:15 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
And a lovely cinquain it is! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Yes, I feel on this very day God is giving us all a big huge hug as He too weeps for us all, promising us love will find a way and justice will be made! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, your words are so touching to us all today, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Me thinks you've done such a good job with this cinquain, I think I may try my hand at a Diamonte. Nothing like stretching ourselves---eh, Mikey! Earth Angel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How much this says... and how true it is... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you everyone.... .m. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Beautiful... H. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superb! there's power in the simple statement Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, H. and VAS. Now, more than ever, I am glad this place exists. .m. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Standing along with you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautiful, Mr.Squirrel... This poem stands on it's own merit...  ~ hugs and grins and acornsLyra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love this!! Well done. ChrisLife is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, everyone. Mikey |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well done, Mikey... lovely! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I see you are as good at short verse as you are at long verse. Well done, Mike!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, both. Yesterday was rough.Mike |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice my friend.... I think I will keep this if you do not mind...to read from time to time when I need to remember certain things. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
By all means, Ron. By all means. Mike |
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