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VAS
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0 posted 2002-09-11 12:40 PM



Just a Drop

give me a drop of sun
or a bit of moonlight’s glow
give me a rainbow’s life
the part that sparks the flow
of colors cross the sky
in sweet array of hues
oh, give me the twinkling light
that glimmers tears anew

©September 11, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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1 posted 2002-09-11 01:04 PM


I'm sure Sunshine would give you that drop of sunshine that you would like
---and I most certainly, will share with you, some of the gold I found at the rainbow's end

-------but only if you'll share with us more of your "twinkling light!"

Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-11-2002 01:10 PM).]

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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2 posted 2002-09-11 01:07 PM


give me a drop of sun
or a bit of moonlight’s glow
give me a rainbow’s life
the part that sparks the flow
of colors cross the sky
in sweet array of hues
oh, give me the twinkling light
that glimmers tears anew

----------------------------

I'd give you that drop
I surely would
even more than that
oh if I could
the sky, the moon
the rainbows end
I'd give it all
to you my friend.

A beautiful poem VAS, enjoyed very much.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2002-09-11 01:09 PM


thank you, both, we all need a bit of light, even when the sun is brightly shining

sometimes it's hard to see its worth
when we're busy at our pining

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-11 09:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And may every tear we cry shine with that light, the light of our Lord's warmth and faith, the flame of our Lady of Peace! (wipes tears) This is excellent, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

(God Bless America)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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