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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-09-11 01:41 AM



I wish my night was full of pain
Agony, hurt, and grief
I'll gladly take it all dear Lord
To bring the world to peace

I'd suffer well, and cry outloud
I'd writhe in misery
Never asking it to stop
So give me pain, I plead


Please God, bring us peace tonight.
Rest well America!! God, and soldiers are watching over you!

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-11 01:44 AM


raising glass to that, Kris
yes
brian

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2 posted 2002-09-11 02:04 AM


Peace and harmony. The price we pay is so high, the reality so elusive.
Peace to you, Kris.

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3 posted 2002-09-11 02:14 AM


"The price we pay is so high, the reality so elusive."

Well done, Kris.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

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4 posted 2002-09-11 02:55 AM


Kris...I feel that you have spoken for many
with these few words. Great poem...Paul

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5 posted 2002-09-11 08:17 AM


I echo these sentiments Kris. You said it all too well. Thank you for this.
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6 posted 2002-09-11 09:47 AM


If only that were all it took to bring about world peace!---then all our PIP sisters and brothers would join hands with you and shout from the rooftops---"Bring it on! We can take it!"

Earth Angel

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7 posted 2002-09-11 11:33 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, today I too pray with you in remembering all the victims and their families and children, you are a true angel of words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

(God Bless America)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-09-11 06:04 PM


Especially well thought.  Thank you for this.
ThisDiamond

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9 posted 2002-09-11 06:15 PM


I'm with you & Earth Angel.  Bring it on!
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10 posted 2002-09-11 06:16 PM


enjoy
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every one you write touches me so deeply Kris, thank you
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