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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-09-10 11:25 PM



…I love you….

(What else can I say?)

…I always will….

(This feeling cant die.)

…. And I have seen…..

(What we could have done.)

…..and could have been…..

So why am I still lost?…. Sing it to me…
YEA
            Yea
                         Yea                             eeaah….
                                  Yeaaaa   ………..

Oh YEEAAHH
    Yeah yeaa……… . . . .
Yea yea yea…
…..and I loved you…..

(In all these lifetimes).

…..I want you……

(Love you love you….)

YEA

YEA
YEA

YEA………

(WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY?)
what else can i say?

(yea yea yea yea) …..always will…. (yea yea yea yea)

(This feeling cant die.)

…. And I have seen…..

(What we could have done.)
WHAT WE COULD HAVE DONE

…..and could have been…..

(swimming in the sea of) what we could be…

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

© Copyright 2002 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-10 11:26 PM


Cool

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2002-09-10 11:35 PM


something shimmered in pools of tears...
Very cool. ThisDiamond

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2002-09-10 11:47 PM


yea i was going a little bit for E.E. Cummings's style with this one.. but making a little more rational sense than alot of his work... thank you for reading the_loner_23, thisdiamond, thank you
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