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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville

0 posted 2002-09-10 10:16 PM


the last picture
is the first I awake with
the moment frozen in my eyes
hanging my heart
the anquished reality
of a beautiful day
that races through
the sunshine falicy
how thoughtful of you
to keep it so
just the perfect illusion
so we would'nt notice
how horriable
we could be to ourselves
but those moments
those rarities we create
to become graceful once more
and to sing with the wind.

© Copyright 2002 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-10 10:17 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-09-11 08:42 AM



The sunshine fallacy...

and yet, without hope, what?

Well done, Sir...

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2002-09-11 12:07 PM


An awesome and inspiring write.

Love,
Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



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The heart of you
4 posted 2002-09-11 01:15 PM


Open eyes are the best way to see.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

EarthenSoul
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since 2002-05-30
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WA, USA
5 posted 2002-09-11 01:35 PM


Sing with the wind my friend, sing with wind.
TradingSpaces19
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since 2002-08-31
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Arvada, Colorado
6 posted 2002-09-13 06:00 PM


good job

andrea

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