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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-09-10 07:53 PM



FOR MIKEY


~

After summer rain,
The bands of misty colors,
Form a bow of light.

~


Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-10-2002 08:19 PM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-09-10 07:55 PM


And this is a goodun.....very nicely done
EA.....on a roll are we...I surely think so.

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2 posted 2002-09-10 08:05 PM


Magnus---That's right kind of you to say!
         BTW--right back atcha'!!!

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3 posted 2002-09-10 08:12 PM


Very nicely done...has Mikey posted a challenge?
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-09-10 08:23 PM


Enchantress---I think this was just a personal challenge for me, so I have now altered the title. I didn't know what all these challenge postings were all about, so when he requested me to write a haiku from my poem "Rainbows"---I thought it was one of those challenges I've been seeing.

Thanks for the lovely comment re this haiku!

Earth Angel

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5 posted 2002-09-10 08:59 PM


After summer rain,
The bands of misty colors,
Form a bow of light

*************************

Shades of color splayed
across the rain moistened sky
endless promise kept.

Thought I'd respond in kind. As always your Haiku is one of beauty, captured, then released from your poets heart. Enjoyed

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6 posted 2002-09-10 09:03 PM


Dear Rose of White---You never cease to amaze me! That was so sweet of you to say, -----and to reciprocate in kind!---and so exceedingly well at that!

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7 posted 2002-09-10 10:55 PM




Yay!!! Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, I can tell Michael really loves this as I do, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-09-10 10:56 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-09-11 08:25 AM


Noah----I hope when Mike sees this, that he will like it as much as you do! He is such a talented and versatile writer (as are you!).

~  smiles  ~

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10 posted 2002-09-11 08:26 AM


Loner---Why, thank you!

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11 posted 2002-09-11 09:06 AM


And what a magnificent bow it is.

How I love a rainbow!

Hugs, Marti

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12 posted 2002-09-11 09:11 AM


Marti---Good morning! ----aren't they just so!---magnificent celestial bows of misty coloured hues!

Linda

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13 posted 2002-09-11 09:24 AM


simply beautiful

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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14 posted 2002-09-11 09:27 AM


VAS---Thank you for that beautiful word, "beautiful".

Earth Angel

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15 posted 2002-09-11 10:00 AM


enjoy
Earth Angel
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16 posted 2002-09-11 10:05 AM


vandana---Thank you for your reply. I'm pleased that you enjoyed reading this haiku.

Earth Angel

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17 posted 2002-09-11 12:17 PM


I loved this, Linda.
By the way, the challenges are all in the Poetry Challenge forum -- under the discussion side of things.
Yep, there's a *whole* other side of PIP to get lost in!

Hmm.... rainbows....

Curving through the sky
to give nature's pallette poise
Light show after rain

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18 posted 2002-09-11 12:19 PM


Mike---gad zooks!--you do keep on surprising me! That was a humdinger of a poetic comeback!

PS---thanks for the info!

Linda

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