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deadeyes Junior Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 33 |
OK i'm stepping off teen poetry because i'm tired of ppl writing cliched poetry and complain about different forms of expression. So i'm going to start writing here. The dead tress swim through the breeze drifting beside the subconscious. The gardenias stand on their feet while the anonymous looks for it's trail. Machines are running on ommissions while the brightness sucks in the madness. While rocks stare at the sculptures finding a possibility through selection. Yet, why is this entity? This reason to swim into thoughts. Is there an explanation to a mystery? Or the unknown tries to explain a being. A place where dead leaves sink and metaphors scream for meaning. A reason to freely arouse a posture but a shade blurs it's purpose. Where silent benches show their muses and a puppet greets his insecurity. While blood turns into solace and a new scene unfolds. "Silencio..no hay banda..no hay orquesta." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very good. I like it.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
does that mean you are a teen? if so, there are some amazing lines in here ones I wish I had the perception to see back then this is good looking forward to more brian |
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deadeyes Junior Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 33 |
Yep only 17 blah!! In a few days only 18 though hooray! jeje "Silencio..no hay banda..no hay orquesta." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
deadeyes, I look forward to more! (and because of your name I have a Smashing Pumpkins song in my head!) Mikey |
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