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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-09-10 02:32 PM


my voice
is two
skins stretched taut
my fingers the thought
that vibrates the heart
    and waves to you

come here!
I long for your counterpoint of coin
imperceptible rasp of love unclasped
joining the metal splash of others

I thank you with more
speed to seven
beats per second
harmonize the hum of life
to beckon smile

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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VAS
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1 posted 2002-09-10 02:37 PM


fascinating weave, love the feel of it

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-09-10 02:39 PM


brian,
Living in New Orleans, and didn't tell me?
Does S'en know?

Mikey

Loved th' drums.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-09-10 02:41 PM




in my dreams...


brian sites
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4 posted 2002-09-10 02:44 PM


thank you, Virginia
mike--- um...damn
indeed
thanks

brian sites
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5 posted 2002-09-10 02:45 PM


k---two skins stretched taut
     hmmmm?


bsquirrel
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6 posted 2002-09-10 02:49 PM


Hey, if I wasn't heading to Calgary,
New Orleans would be the place for me --
until the flying roaches set in,
anyway.



And Brian ........... ooooooooh!

SlowSubtextMike

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7 posted 2002-09-10 03:15 PM


The way you "harmonized the hum of life", I reckon the "beckoned" smile, is well deserved!!----so here it is!

~

S-M-I-L-E

~

Earth Angel


brian sites
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8 posted 2002-09-10 03:16 PM


thanks EA
you gave me one!

Tiersdin
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9 posted 2002-09-10 03:58 PM


Loved the passion in this, Brian...

Encore!

*chuckles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

brian sites
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10 posted 2002-09-10 04:02 PM


thank you, Tiers
encore? jeez this was hard enough
blockedbrian

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11 posted 2002-09-10 08:31 PM


I can hear that drumming now
WhiteRose
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12 posted 2002-09-10 08:34 PM


*listening* Well I'll be, I hear drums.
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