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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-09-10 10:06 AM


dust covered mesquite
unrelenting sun beats down
summer prairie life

Inspired by:Snow-laden Cedars…….(Haiku)


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-10 10:08 AM



Singeing memories
ashes dusting drought-filled times
lets one cry, again

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2 posted 2002-09-10 10:08 AM


smoke covered mountains
rain washing away the land
Colorado burns


Yours was much more pleasant....

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3 posted 2002-09-10 10:11 AM



Why, thank you kind sir! You done did me proud with them there kind words!

Your writing was so effective, I have to cut my reply short---'cause you've made me thirstier than a 'possum in a salt mine!

~ Smiles ~

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4 posted 2002-09-10 10:12 AM


Sunshine ~
crying is cleanser
unpleasantness washed away
its not that easy

Midnitesun ~
My heart cries to see the beautiful forest burned away like that.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-09-10 10:13 AM


Well done poet sir !! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-09-10 10:14 AM


Earth Angel ~
Are you a transplanted Texican?  NOT!  
Kind of a reverse inspiration I admit  
I do, however have another you inspired that I will post in the future.

Chris ~
Thank you sweet lady


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (09-10-2002 10:15 AM).]

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7 posted 2002-09-10 11:01 AM


the deserts burn up
aurora borealis
in Texas passion



(smiles) Wow, I have been down to Texas and the canyons and wide open spaces there are amazing to me! (big hugggsssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, you are the supreme master of senryu, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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