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vandana
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0 posted 2002-09-10 09:59 AM


Don't let me know
Iam last one to know
Don't let me know
That It Is not
your heart
doesn't love me
Don't let me cry
Let us try
and start new life again
Together
Don't let me the last to know
Cause my heart is weak
and will die of a broken heart
Don't let me think that
your love is not important
more than anything else
In this world
Don't let me be the one
to know that your love
is not enough
To give me
In my heart
there always been
a love for you
So don't let me think
you don't love me anymore
Don't let me the last one
to know

© Copyright 2002 vandana - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-09-10 10:11 AM


Sad, but nicely presented, Vandana.
Peaceful smiles to you.

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-09-10 10:17 AM


Enjoyed.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-09-10 11:07 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, I hope these are not current feelings you're expressing, sweet friend, this is heartaching and I wish for love to always be there for you and you always being the first to know that! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-09-10 05:34 PM


yes Vandana,  I think you deserve a hug...
No one likes to be last....certainly when
love is involved.....

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-09-10 06:57 PM


but ignorance is bliss sometimes, they say
Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-09-10 07:46 PM


The last to know, is the most difficult position....
Very beautiful poem, Vandana...
~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

WhiteRose
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7 posted 2002-09-10 08:39 PM


The last to know is always the one most hurt. Very well written.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-09-12 02:45 AM


Very nice vandana...James
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