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To Wake In The Morn.........(Senryu)
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To Wake In The Morn.........(Senryu) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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~ To wake in the morn As the sun's rays fill my room --I'm glad I'm alive ~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cascading shadows Hide & peek behind the clouds Sunshine reigns today |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine----"and sunshine reigns today"--and indeed it will---with a poetic response like that! Great way for me to start my day! Thank you! That is a wonderful haiku! May the kiss of sunlight add to your crown of glory, Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-10-2002 10:02 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dawn's shell-pink fingers Reach through my tightly-closed blinds~ Unlock a new day. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchantress---My day's getting even better! Thank you! That is a marvellous haiku. There is so much talent here at PIP, that it almost overwhelms me---but, I'm learning so much as I read everyone's work! Have a wonderful day! Earth Angel |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
abdominal knots rouse this aching head, throw sheets race for the bathroom people can be awakened so differently, Earth Angel, I was up too early for the sun to waken me, or is it that the sun slept too late? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VAS---you crack me up! Oh, that isn't very empathetic of me to laugh at your plight! I can definitely identify with that morning state of discomfiture that you are experiencing. Maybe the sun will go back to sleep for an hour, so you can! Sweet daydreams! Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
cotton candy swirls ice cream truck sirens of dawn fill a kids delight  Yay!!! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah---my day just keeps getting better, and better, and better! I've been blessed with another poetic response today! Yours is delightful! Thank you! PS---you and I just kids at heart! Race ya to the ice cream truck! Enjoy your day! Earth Angel |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
each day I thank God for another day of life He has blessed me so Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Interloper----and thank you for "blessing" me with such a heart-warming response! Blessings on you this day, dear poet! Earth Angel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Good one. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T---so was your reply! Thank you! May the sun fill your day and your thoughts! EA |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I never knew much about such poetic forms but I do like this ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ Wranx, you do know much About this poetic form --The proof is in the pudding! ~ Thank you for your poetic reply! May your day be a good one! Earth Angel [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-10-2002 12:04 PM).] |
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