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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-09-10 05:26 AM


Heavenly Dad

My Dad is gone.
He's in heaven
with his Heavenly Father
where he belongs.
We all will have our day
when we will pass away.
Let us hope while we pass our time
on Earth we will enjoy our stay.
My Dad was only forty eight.
In many ways still a young man.
Looking forward to a well earned
retirement was his earthy plan.
But now he's gone.
We all will have our day
when we will pass away.
Heavenly we shall drift away.
Dad enjoy your stay.
Dad I'm looking forward to
joining you in heaven
when I pass away.

JamesLee
Sept10
2002
My Dad passed away
many years ago...
HeavenlyFather
BeSoMerciful
ToPrepareA
PlaceForMe.

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (09-10-2002 05:28 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-09-10 06:10 AM


James this is beautiful!  Tender and loving for your father.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-10 08:15 AM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your dad will always love you so very much and will always guide you with his light from up above where when the time is right you will meet him forever one day! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-09-10 04:21 PM


This is sad. But very well written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-09-10 04:32 PM


A very tender tribute to your dad, James...
I am sorry to hear that he passed on.
~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-09-10 04:37 PM


I believe this to be one of your best, James.  I'm very sorry to hear of your father.  Take care.  
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2002-09-12 02:49 AM


Thank you Gentle Spirit, Noah, the_loner_23, Madame and Auguste for the kind replies...my Dad passed away many years ago but I sometimes think of him...James
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