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TriXter
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since 2002-03-20
Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-09-10 01:59 AM



Dear lord help me with my toughts, with my fears..

somone wake me, im dazed and confused in this so called dream
the life thats so beautiful so to seem
the only light i see is from a sun beam
peircing through dark shadows, and arrow through my heart
so hard for you have i stood and faught
youre heart i strive but still not caught,
bolted down with 4 guards, steel and a padlock
i just dunno whats up.

re-thinkin my plans of life and whats to be
when i hear sappy songs its you i cant help to see
lookin like you care less, you i want to coress
so much stress, to you lord i confess
all my sins all my fears all the stupid acts that ive said or done
from standing and facing, from lookin to run
for all the teen stuff that we consider fun
to you i pray and beg for a new life
to blessed with few children and a loving wife
cause i jus' dunno whats up.

new school new people but same ol' tude,
new people with new thought but still actin rude
thinkin they hot shhh and they comin through
thank god youre so different, that their not you
but a new girl ive met and i think of too.
dark clouds over my head, aint no sunshine
victum to my lowly heart, im on the shooting line
prepared for the worse, for my heart to end in a hearse
cuz with all the roughness down, its the Trix curse.
im prepared to lose,
and i jus' dunno whats up.

The man of few words...

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geenabee
Member
since 2002-09-10
Posts 59
NC--USA
1 posted 2002-09-10 02:03 AM


Love the grit!
feelin' the distress
hopin stuff gets ok
love sucks...
then you get hitched and it gets worse
just kiddin

Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2002-09-10 04:07 PM


And the further you go the more you don't know what's up. I guarantee.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-09-10 04:12 PM


I like the way you make your feelings flow.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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