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Open Poetry #22

Missnobody

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

0 posted 2002-09-09 11:27 PM

Missnobody you have touched
you have lived and breathed in much
you gift in word and thought and rhyme
you place your heart on page sublime
you leave with all fond intent
your sence of self evident
the only error I see as true
the thought that nobody would miss you.
nobody said this was a breeze.
I see your quoted often.
You must realy be sombody.
Don't you forget it!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-09 11:31 PM

I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

2 posted 2002-09-09 11:46 PM

Thanx Loner Thought a rethink was in order Hope Sue likes it too.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-09-09 11:46 PM

NICE!!

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

4 posted 2002-09-10 12:01 PM

I seem to be inspiring brevity this evening.
thanx for looking in Krishankins.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2002-09-10 12:36 PM

Thank you very much for writing this. She is definitely a somebody. Now hopefully, she will read and believe.

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

6 posted 2002-09-10 09:52 PM

I hope Sue reads too and thank you for the peak. None should feel so down as those short lines implied. I hope to hear her smile soon.

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