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Crestfallen Moon

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Marge Tindal
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Crestfallen Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

Cresting sliver of gilded light
falls across this indigo night
A whispering slice in the sky
this crestfallen moon
in gentle-light sigh~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Marge....you write of our moon as no other
can...or ever will......
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Girl you must have been reading my mind earlier. Ron and I were out for a walk this evening and were looking at this sliver moon. I told him you'd probably write some magnificent piece. And you did!

Hugs and loves, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

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Speechless

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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You painted a lovely picture of the moon with your words, Marge...
~ loony chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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Marge---This was so lovely, that I just pulled back my covers to see the moon! (Oh, my goodness---I meant, pulled back my "curtains" !!)---To see a moon under my covers, would give my reply a whole other meaning! hehe

Unfortunately, when I pulled back my "curtains!"---there was no moon in sight. So, the only moon I'll be seeing tonight--is yours! tehe

Earth Angel

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LOL@EarthAngel pulling back the covers.
Beautiful write Marge.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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Thanks for the smile, Marge.

Me
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enjoyed
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Even when crestfallen, our moon is beautiful....
 
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