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juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2002-09-09 02:12 PM

it is said that a man
who holds true to himself
and lives to understand
and hold real emotions towards
whats to be done
and what has been done
will reagain complet joy
in his spirit within

marking the world
with his fears and wisdom
to be reacalled in his demice
it is not the way u fall
but the way u aproach the destination
AND WITH OUT HESITATION RE-STANDING TALL
for 4 it all
u need to think twice
and be wice to not fall in entrapted
predicaments that u alone can not bare

dreams of a man
to be the one all livin loves
and love as equal
because the real life will never have
a scequel
the dreams of a man is to be understood
as all the teachings would

but above it all
IS FOR HIS DAUGHTERS TO CALL HIM DADDY!
dough at times i do not show
my love 4 u will always glow

GABBY AND ANGEL
my reason for standing tall
when all obstacles
cause me to fall

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-09 02:17 PM

This is wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-09-11 04:22 AM

Juan, it's obvious how much you love your children, and I am sure you stand very tall in their eyes. I admire the devotion and the feelings you shared in this write. With a little language editing, this can be a very powerful poem. It is anyway! but reads a little bit rough. Peace to you and your family, Kacy.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-09-12 10:36 PM

Children are the essence of love... and your message conveys that so well.

check your spell checker next time...I'm looking forward to it.

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

4 posted 2002-09-12 10:41 PM

How sweet of you to write for your children. In them you may find true inspiration.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-12 11:16 PM

Beautifully penned...lovely tribute to your children.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

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