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. . . only we two . . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You speak and I get chills just hearing the huskiness of your come hither voice I invariably move to your side as you remove the covers revealing your remarkable assets beckoning me with body language enveloping me with love showering me with kisses covering me with caresses until I forget everything except we two only us Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
oh this is wonderful. Gave me a warm fuzzy all over. Enjoyed!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
excuse me I need to go take a cold shower Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Warm fuzzies, indeed... well done... and the ending? Superb! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You live "deep in the heart"----and you affect your readers "deep in the heart" as well! Earth Angel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
warm and inviting, wonderfully written! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WhiteRose ~ Then, I just may have succeeded in my effort: Virginia ~ Oh, yes ... no hot water in the GR8 Northwest ... How long does it take to boil 50 gallons of water?  Sunshine ~ Those warm fuzzies are probably dust bunnies from my mind Earth Angel ~ That was a special reply and I am honored by it Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sensually beautiful, this too made me feel woosy just thinking of my sweetheart Joanna! (big hugggsssss) Your words always flow with such magic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Listen my friend, when Balladeer talks to ya like that be very cautious...I've heard he lies....and LongJohn said his kisses weren't that great....but your poem is... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper It brought back old memories. LOL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now...dear Interloper...how am I supposed to concentrate on housework after reading this?!! lol. Wonderful. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you whisper so sotly.....lovely sir...always... Lauren~ I need some distraction |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Noah ~ You might need oxygen since you're way up in Colorado Toe ~ I heard the same thing from Larry C. Sy ~ Maybe not so old my friend Chris ~ Ain't it fun thoough Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lauren ~ I almost missed you ... but glad I didn't. Psst ... I forgot to whisper Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (09-09-2002 11:49 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Darn, I only had my usual shower this AM! Where were you an hour ago? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Last time I replied to a line like that Ron has some rather unkind words for my eyes Thank you, Kacy. Thank you VERY much Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart This is utterly utterly wonderful When I think you have reached the peak of your perfection you then write something that is so perfect and full of beauty I find myself saying this is sighhhhhhhh. As always darling heart your writing is tres tres bon. You of course know I adore this don’t you? Mmmmm I do! In heated sigh my defences fall To whisper yes to this soul’s call While I lay my voice in tender rest Softly against the rising chest And feel the sighs stirring deep within That urges me again to sin Touch this flame, feel its rising heat Igniting as your pulses beat Send all your dreams of this flying there Where your hope waits to taste the dare Now bathe the thought in your whispering sigh Then fly with me up to the sky And in all your dreams I will wrap you In fire’s light and heated dew   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling heart This is utterly utterly wonderful When I think you have reached the peak of your perfection you then write something that is so perfect and full of beauty I find myself saying this is sighhhhhhhh. As always darling heart your writing is tres tres bon. You of course know I adore this don’t you? Mmmmm I do! In heated sigh my defences fall To whisper yes to this soul’s call While I lay my voice in tender rest Softly against the rising chest And feel the sighs stirring deep within That urges me again to sin Touch this flame, feel its rising heat Igniting as your pulses beat Send all your dreams of this flying there Where your hope waits to taste the dare Now bathe the thought in your whispering sigh Then fly with me up to the sky And in all your dreams I will wrap you In fire’s light and heated dew Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful...as always |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooooh Myyyyyy!!!! *That very loud 'sigh' you just heard was the sound of a Canadian redhead... a very rare species, I'm told* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mushy ~ The temperature in here just went up about 50 degrees What a beautiful reply. You are the GR8est Helen ~ Thanks. Nancy Lee ~ Red head? As in Irish descent? I almost had a case of the vapors myownself That's Texas for "me, too" Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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rampage New Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 6Oklahoma |
I never knew your heart was so warm, but now I do. You and your words are an insperation, and I learn more and more every day. An outstanding piece of work. Rampage |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
rampage ~ I guess we both have a lot to learn, huh Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
I thought I'd jump on the band wagon and bump this one, too. It is one of my very favorites. Admiring you at Passions. |
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