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VAS
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0 posted 2002-09-09 09:51 AM


This one was too much fun! A poetry class assignment was to use "war, flowers, cider, and grasshopper" in any order in a poem.

Insecticide as Opposed to Homocide

Sippin’ cider on the lawn
in the early risin’ dawn
by the flowers in the bed
chattin’ poetry with Ted.

All at once there was a roar
we both looked to see, “What for?”
There across the span of green,
it was quite a grisly scene.

Tobaccy juice was left and right
it was such a horrid sight.
Yet we knew at one glance
by the firm of their stance,

that the jay and the gull
had made grasshoppers null.
Their beaks coated in black
evidenced their war attack.

Ted and I knew without doubt
as our stomachs reamed out,
cider’d never be the same
gull and jay were to blame.

So we packed up all our gear
and we moved to the rear,
grabbing hoses near the house
giving lawn a heavy douse.

We washed away all evidence
begging gull for recompense
and from jay a solemn oath
a “Nevermore,” Raven quoth.


©September 9, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.


[This message has been edited by VAS (09-09-2002 11:13 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-09 09:54 AM


Who would've thunk it?---- that a piece of poetry such as this, could've been born out of such words! Well done!

Linda

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2 posted 2002-09-09 09:56 AM


I'm glad you have so much fun with poetry, Virginia.  I have fun reading it, too

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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