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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-09-09 04:38 AM


Isn't this
your fondest wish?
nothing left for me to give...
Isn't this
just what you want?
excuse to say you could not win?

Don't you think?
I saw this?--you--

cannot hold
and push me too..


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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2002-09-09 06:25 AM


Nothing left for me to give. Strong words.
Love has to be a little of both...Paul

Thomas119gold
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2 posted 2002-09-09 07:19 AM


Hmmmmmm
I will have to ponder on this
Thomas

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2002-09-09 07:37 AM


a tug-o-war it may be... as it may seem...

there is so much to read in your write...

regards,
sudhir

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-09-09 09:45 AM


Isn't this
your fondest wish?
nothing left for me to give...

Another part (though past) of the reason I'm up at this hour...

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-09-09 02:39 PM


don't you know me...geez, you're inside my head here with this one!
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-09-09 05:10 PM


I swear I wanna write happy stuff...sigh

anybody wanna make me happy?

(as The Devine Poet always says? "What a loaded question!" )

sorry for the bummer good people...and thanks for indulging me, yet again...



Love you all!

wranx
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7 posted 2002-09-09 06:13 PM


Frustrated, on the short end.
Resigned?, on the other.

Hmmm.

~Ed

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-09-09 06:20 PM


Wanna change places, Karen?
Come on... be happy!!!!!
~ heres some hugs and a grin

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Ceinwyn
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9 posted 2002-09-09 06:45 PM


*hands you some chocolate chip cookies* haha with a secret ingredient that oughta make you happy lmao! ohhh now I must respond to your poem..my mind is pondering and wandering nonetheless...

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

vandana
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10 posted 2002-09-09 06:46 PM


enjoyed
vandana
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11 posted 2002-09-09 06:47 PM


enjoyed
serenity blaze
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12 posted 2002-09-09 11:50 PM


Thanks good poets.  Yer all delicious.

and speaking of...

um...any more of those cookies left?

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13 posted 2002-09-10 05:29 PM


Sen,
Sometimes ...

Other times ...

Mike

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