A raibow is born(cinquain)

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chitsank
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

0 posted 2002-09-09 02:00 AM

Sun's rays
are surprised by
the sudden rain drops and
both make love, and a rainbow they
beget.

[This message has been edited by chitsank (09-09-2002 02:02 AM).]

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-09-09 08:46 AM

Oh and this is what happens on those musky kind of days when they are feeling so inclined.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-09-09 09:04 AM

I think you did a fine job with this piece of writing! I love the concept of a rainbow being born out of the love 'twixt sun and rain.

Earth Angel

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-09-09 10:27 AM

I love rainbows, and this poem!

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-09 10:30 AM

Cute, very cute idea.
Making love, not war, certainly is promising.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (09-09-2002 10:30 AM).]

chitsank
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

5 posted 2002-09-11 02:17 AM

Thanx to u all for ur words of appreciation.

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-09-11 01:18 PM

chitsank,
Thanks for the beautiful poem
and for cluing me in that such things
as "cinquains"
exist.

Mikey

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-11 08:59 PM

Yay!!! Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, rainbows are so gorgeous and heavenly, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-09-11 09:13 PM

So lovely a thought sorely needed tonight.
Thank you. ThisDiamond

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

9 posted 2002-09-12 01:47 AM

Thanx bsquirel for ur kind remarks. Glad u liked.

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

10 posted 2002-09-12 01:49 AM

Thanx noah for ur kind words. hope u enjoyed the poem as much as u enjoy rainbows.

chitsank
Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 88

11 posted 2002-09-12 02:03 AM

Thyanx diamond for ur remarks.

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