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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-09-09 12:33 PM


I chased my shadow
into the night, but
it wouldn't leave me alone.
No matter how
I twisted and turned,
there it was,
my awful clone.
I finally gave up
without a fight...
it was hopeless
trying to hide.
The only solution
was to hang my head,
then my shadow...
it suddenly cried.
I gathered it up
into my arms
and soothed it's aching heart.
I told it I would never leave,
and never would ask it to part.
For united we stand,
divided we fall.
When our back's up against a wall,
we are One.
(OK, now it's YOUR turn, friends, have you got a shadow poem?)

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-09-2002 09:26 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-09 12:34 PM


Speechless

Cold hands means a warm heart

secretlife
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2 posted 2002-09-09 12:45 PM


Very nice writting,,,I love your words..you know sometimes I tried to hide from my shadow but I couldnt,,,any way nice reading your poem I really enjoy reading it.

Thanx alot
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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3 posted 2002-09-09 12:51 PM


This is so very well done, Kacy...
I have been trying to write something like that for quite a long time... in fact, I have half a notebook filled with failures...
but you have said just what I had been trying to say....... absolutely perfectly!
~ chipmunk hugs...green with envy

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-09-09 12:53 PM


Julie, thanks for reading. Did your shadow slip away from you for a minute?

Secret, you can run but you cannot hide?

Lyra, then it rightfully belongs to you. I must have gathered it up from a runaway Michigan moonbeam.

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5 posted 2002-09-09 01:13 AM


Night Peter Pan.
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6 posted 2002-09-09 01:20 AM


Oh you and your shadow make quite a pair!!
You wrote this so well Midnite woman!!!

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-09-2002 01:34 AM).]

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7 posted 2002-09-09 01:47 AM


Kacy,
INCREDIBLE!

I wish I were half as clever as you. Have you acquired a magic carpet to go along with that camelhair bikini?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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8 posted 2002-09-09 08:47 AM


If shadows lined up
as they should
each morning at this time
would the day walk
easier
the words upon
a mind
or settle
back into slumber
to try again
horizontally
shadows dissapear

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9 posted 2002-09-09 09:23 AM


Bluesy gal, your reply warms my shadowy soul.

Larry, wanna ride along and look for lost shadows?

Duncan, awesome reply. You should post it separately. I herbey declare this to be a SHADOW challenge.

  

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10 posted 2002-09-09 05:55 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, you are amazing, do you know that? I love this, I would love to try this challenge too, you capture shadows with such grace here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-09-09 07:41 PM


Kacy...This is incredible...Paul
The joining of two
Your shadow and you

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12 posted 2002-09-10 12:21 PM


Thanks, Noah! Go for it. Write your shadow.

Paul, what a generous kind reply! Thanks. Now where is your shadow?

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