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Rodney Belcher
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Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2002-09-08 11:38 PM


When I left I took some things with me
I took a heart full of memories
A few photographs
Some old cards and letters
A lifetime together
Packed in a cardboard box
As time has gone by
I have lost those effects
Along with the feelings and
The hurt
I’ve thrown away things
That once had much meaning
Replaced by a new life
With new love, new respect
For myself
I have forgotten the bad times
Along with the good
Slowly the traces that once were you
Are being erased
From my home
From my heart
One by one

Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-08 11:39 PM


So true this is

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-08 11:41 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Rodney, this is powerfully bittersweet, I can understand how difficult it can be to let go, but all the better it will be and true happiness is bound to be yours as you are so deserving of it! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rodney, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-09 03:41 PM


This reflects your moving onward with your life and no longer looking back.

May I say, that I personally find that I don't throw the good out with the bad. I retain the sweet memories of each relationship that I have had----the bad ones I leave well enough alone! I leave those in the past where they belong.

This was a very poignant piece of writing.

Earth Angel


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4 posted 2002-09-09 03:49 PM


Slowly the traces that once were you
Are being erased
From my home
From my heart
One by one
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Excellent piece of writing Rodney
..especially enjoyed the ending.
~Waving a hand across the border, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-09-09 03:54 PM


Rodney,
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

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6 posted 2002-09-09 03:56 PM


Yes, sometimes you just have to leave all of it behind, to free up your arms to enfold a new world of possibilities.
I understand this emotion realease very well.

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