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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-09-08 10:02 PM


I can smell autumn in the air
It is a unique smell

The wind whips up
It starts to get cooler
And the leaves start to change colors

Some animals are getting ready
For the winter
For the winter hibernation
When they can't eat
Or drink
Just sleep

Autumn is a beautiful
Time of year
And always will be

Cold hands means a warm heart

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-09-08 10:05 PM


Yes Julie, I agree. Very nicely done.
Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2002-09-08 10:09 PM


I have to say, autumn is my favorite time of year.  There is nothing like watching the leaves change into brilliant colors.  Wonderful write!

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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3 posted 2002-09-08 10:27 PM


I agree, autumn is the best! HAHA, I think I said the same thing about winter last year in Alaska. I must have been captured by an Aurora.
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4 posted 2002-09-08 10:31 PM


My favourite time of year too!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-09-08 10:41 PM




Yay!!! Oh Julie, though spring is my favorite season, I love all the seaosns and autumn's colors and wind always makes me smile too! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThunderMage
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6 posted 2002-09-08 10:51 PM


I like all the seasons except Winter... I'm weak against water and ice. But a bit of rain won't kill me.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-09-09 01:02 AM


My favorite time also...
I've been real busy, stuffing those acorns into my cheek pouches and hiding them in my little underground burrow...

I love the colors of autumn...
nice write, Julie
~ hugs and acorns

Lyra

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Aimster
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8 posted 2002-09-09 01:42 AM


yes autumn is indeed a magical season...
as you have captured here with your
beautiful words...this was lovely

take care
amy

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2002-09-09 01:43 AM


I can feel the wind changing direction and the sun moving higher in the sky...but it still looks like summer to me...for just a while  longer!  Neat poem Julie~~the anticipation of fall conjures up so much!!  
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10 posted 2002-09-09 02:27 AM


Julie...I agree Autumn is a wonderful time.
The cool temps. are what I like the most...Paul

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2002-09-09 05:27 PM


What you have shown here, is that autumn truly is "a beautiful time of year."

This was lovely.

And yes, there is a unique smell in the air----and I love it!---it's "earthy" !

Earth Angel

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