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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-09-08 07:54 PM







~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-09-08 07:58 PM


You do, have a way with words, don't you?!?
----Ahhh!

Earth Angel

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-09-08 08:01 PM


Simply splendid! Enjoyed the lovely view of your words...oh, and the picture too.
Betty
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3 posted 2002-09-08 08:07 PM


As usual this is awesome.
Love,
Betty

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4 posted 2002-09-08 08:13 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is exquisite writing, and the thoughts simply flow down the page here. YOU have to know I utterly utterly utterly love this. That is one of your chief accomplishments darling heart, your ability to wrap wisdom in the type of words that make the reader pause and think, what greater gift could you give than a glimpse into your heart. And the beauty of your image is stunning

You really are the bees knees darling heart, I truly love it when you write like this, this is one of your utter best

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-09-08 08:48 PM


Too beautiful for words, Marge...
~ lots of chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2002-09-08 10:05 PM


Ooooooooooooo, how perfect Margie~
Especially your words that made for the prettiest picture.  

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2002-09-08 10:11 PM


Wonderful write and great presentation, Marge!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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8 posted 2002-09-08 11:08 PM


Marge:  Lovely poem and I hope your love for Bill is as eternal as the sea!

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-09-09 09:10 AM


EarthAngel~
Just some little thoughts I found drifting~
Thanks gal~

WhiteRose~
I appreciate that !  Thank you~

Betty~
Awwwww ... I love ya' gal~

MarshaLove~
You've got me cracking up at 'bees knees' ...
somehow ... that one's hard to imagine !
LOL ... PiPITIS .... 'sooner than soon' ~

Lyra~
What a lovely thing to say ... (or not say) Tee-Hee~
LOVE YOU~

BluesSerenade~
Thanks ... words came in on a wave of inspire~

LoneWolf~
How WONDERFUL to see you gal~
Hope all is well in your corner of the world~
Thank you for stopping by this one~

BettyLou~
Thanks hon~
It just goes on foreverly~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
10 posted 2002-09-09 02:21 PM


Oh Marge, this is soooo beautiful. I love the way you do this.
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Deep in the heart
11 posted 2002-09-09 02:32 PM


Hmmmmmmmmmm.  You know what I think of this

I once tried to hollow out the sea ... it just kept filling back in

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
12 posted 2002-09-09 03:34 PM


Soooooooo lovely, my friend
I tried to fill a hollow with the sea and it all crashed in on me....no more sandcastles with a mote.... giggles!
This is a keeper
, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
13 posted 2002-09-09 08:54 PM


SweetSue~
You know I appreciate you and your friendship~
Thank you lovely lady~

InterLoper~
Ahhhhhh, that IS the magic of the waves~
They continue to return to us ...
washing over us with renewal of purpose~

KoKo~
LOL ... not a re-moat possibility of me getting swamped~
Always good to sea you galfriend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
14 posted 2002-09-09 09:19 PM


Fabulous my friend; love it so much.

So glad you'll be coming along and poking your head out of my pocket tomorrow.

I won't let you miss a thing.

Hugs, Marti

mycafe
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15 posted 2002-09-09 11:05 PM


Marge...a refreshing feeling after I've spot on this! lovely!!

marie

Keep counting your blessings

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